Prima & Michael [3-14-11]

In today's lesson we reviewed an essay. This essay doesn't really compare to mine at all. Although I had some of the same arguments, they were worded out completely different. Throughout my entire essay I tried to stay on one point so I wouldn't confuse the reader but now reading this essay I realize that having many different arguments makes the essay flow better. I really liked this essay kept a consistent flow & kept me interested. The fact that the essay didn't confuse me made it all the more enjoyable to read.